Due to the story line and shots of our opening sequence, It didn't require much or any dialogue, but it did require stage directions.
For example:
Girl one chewing chewing gum seductively, showing that she wants to have attention drawn to her.
Girl one leaning over the car door seductively, peering head into window. showing that she knows what she is doing and also that she wants the male inside the car to know what job she is doing.
Girl one trying to struggle free from males hand over mouth, showing that she is powerless and weak compared to the killer.
Shuffling of girl ones feet at the bottom of the car to show that she cannot escape.
Girl two 'strutting' up to the camera, representing confidence and an overpowering presence, thinking that she is in control.
Girl one lying lifeless in the boot of the car, showing that she is trapped and having the street lamps flicker over her shows how she is being taken away somewhere mysterious, this shows how the girl was no match for the killer, then putting her bloody hand on the back window of the car, making the audience feel nervous for her fate
Girl two leaning over car, creating dramatic irony for the audience, as she thinks she is in control of the whole situation and feels like she is going to be rewarded with money but really she is going to be killed.
Page by Hannah.
For example:
Girl one chewing chewing gum seductively, showing that she wants to have attention drawn to her.
Girl one leaning over the car door seductively, peering head into window. showing that she knows what she is doing and also that she wants the male inside the car to know what job she is doing.
Girl one trying to struggle free from males hand over mouth, showing that she is powerless and weak compared to the killer.
Shuffling of girl ones feet at the bottom of the car to show that she cannot escape.
Girl two 'strutting' up to the camera, representing confidence and an overpowering presence, thinking that she is in control.
Girl one lying lifeless in the boot of the car, showing that she is trapped and having the street lamps flicker over her shows how she is being taken away somewhere mysterious, this shows how the girl was no match for the killer, then putting her bloody hand on the back window of the car, making the audience feel nervous for her fate
Girl two leaning over car, creating dramatic irony for the audience, as she thinks she is in control of the whole situation and feels like she is going to be rewarded with money but really she is going to be killed.
Page by Hannah.